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Kasidi vs AI (24) - Getting Richer

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Getting Richer 
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The flight is okay, the food is okay, the lesson is more than okay.
After smiling each other, Kasidi feels okay to this
          good looking guy.
Go to Jakarta, right, he asks politely, Kasidi nods,
          conversation is started.
Business or pleasure, pleasure is the answer,
          visiting my nephew.
Oh, ok, I visit my daughter, she does her
          doctorate, I am retired.
Oh, ok. Good for your daughter, majoring in ...
Business is the answer, I don't like business,
I like giving, but it is not easy.

Do you believe that giving is difficult, receiving
is much easier?
Kasidi is a little bit surprised because as far as
          he knows, both are not easy
Giving is not easy, receiving is not easy, so why.
Tomorrow is a year I try to give my money freely
          but instead of shrinking,
I am richer and richer, you follow my story, right?
I stare to this man, no suspicious sign in his eyes.
There is no question he is serious and sincere,
No sign as a liar in the eyes, just only honesty.
I have a lot of rich friends, many of them very rich,
And I want to donate my money to them but
Instead of they receive, in fact they pay me a lot.

If you want to give, just give, and then how come
Instead of donating then you are receiving ...
That is the problem, he cut sharply, I am getting
Richer and richer, you know how much money
I get this year, I shake my head, astonishingly.
Billions, you know, that is the answer, that is
The reason I only offer to my rich friends, not ...
He stops for a while, gazing on me, and ... shit,
I understand he must think I am not a rich one
And that is true ... hehehe ... do you want ...
To give a shot receiving my challenge offer?
Without thinking to much I nod, who is afraid,
Asshole, then he starts his challenging donation.

You may choose, if I offer you one billion and
Ten thousand IDR, which one will be your choice.
If you take one billion, then stop there, finish.
I have to chose ten thousand because that is
The only option left. but you have an obligation to feed me until the next seventeen days
By doubling each day my money, please think
A while before you respond to my challenge ...
Without a blink the answer is given like lightning
I choose one billion, choosing without blinking.

Then the silence becomes the king between us.

That is the reason why I choose my rich friends
To answer my challenge, to receive my donation.
I think you are not rich enough to pay me, right?
   
Again the silence becomes the king between us.
We don't speak anymore until landing in Jakarta.
We don't even meet again after that bizarre short
Conversation, but this is the fact must be stated,
He is right, I am not rich enough to pay and feed
Him ... IDR 310.720.000 is a lot of money, I don't
Have and this is just a basic math, right? Wow ...

(tbs-kas/sda-25122024-087853451949)

     When the title of this poem is inserted to the browser of AIPG, the following poem shows up.
         
In days of old, when wealth was told
A tale of riches, now a story bold
A dream of fortune, a life of gold
A path to prosperity, a tale to hold

The streets of gold, a city of wealth
Where fortunes are made, and dreams are birthed
The hustle and bustle, a never-ending quest
To climb the ladder, to reach the crest

The riches of the world, a treasure trove
A chest of gold, a heart of love
The joys of wealth, a life of bliss
A world of wonder, a life of delight

But beware, my friend, of the pitfalls of wealth
The traps of greed, the snares of health
For riches can consume, and souls can fade
Leaving only emptiness, and a life mislaid

So cherish your wealth, with a heart of gold
And remember, true riches are not told
But lived and loved, in a life of grace
A life of wealth, a life in its place.

     When the terms such as 'a billion, ten thousand, 17 days, double each day' are added, then the result is

In days of old, when wealth was scarce
A billion was a fortune to traverse
But now, in times of change and might
A billion's just the starting point, in sight

Ten thousand days of toil and strife
I worked to build my fortunes, life
But now, with riches beyond compare
I double my wealth, without a single care

In just 17 days, my fortunes grew
A sum so vast, I never knew
But with each passing day, it's true
My wealth will double, that's what I do

So listen up, and heed my word
For wealth and riches, I have heard
Just work hard, and never cease
Your dreams will come, in perfect peace.

When the terms such as 'IDR 310.720.000, basic math' are also added, then the result is

In days of old, when wealth was scarce,
A billion bucks, a mere nursery rhyme,
But now, with math, our fortunes soar,
Ten thousand times, in just seventeen days, no more.

IDR 310.720.000, a sum so grand,
Basic math, our wealth to expand,
Double each day, our riches to find,
A fortune made, in just a bind.

The world is ours, with wealth to spare,
A billion bucks, we'll soon be there,
So let us dream, and let us soar,
With math, our fortunes, forever more.


          The result is still a good rhyming poem but from the essence perspective the AI Poem Generator fails to catch the core of the original poem entitled Getting Rich, but is it a shame for AIPG? Of course not because there is a possibility that in the future, let's say a decade later, when the AI more sophisticated, it can catch the Kasidi's imagination and creativity which are so far very good in making something up.

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