Kasidi vs AI (2) - How was a Poem Composed

How was a Poem Composed

          The following poem is inspired by a poem written by a giant figure of the Romantic Period and his sister who writes a diary. When years later the diary reads again by the poet then amazing poem emerges. So it is full of allusion, the problem is like this 'can AI recognize the allusions in this poem then used them in generating many rhyming poems?' Let's check them out but before that you may explore the poem thoroughly.  

How was a Poem Composed         

Composing a poem is a mysterious thing.
A lesser poet or the greatest one do the same thing,
Always having a strange way in making and creating
Experiencing directly or just referring and quoting.

The greatest man of cloud did the similar thing,                            
After in Eusemere eating and in the lake walking                              
The notes of a threatening and misty morning                                
Becoming the way for recalling and remembering.
             
Then two years later a beautiful poem appearing              
Talking about the flowers fluttering and dancing              
Stretching never ending with the heads tossing              
Under the breeze sprouting the gay sparkling.
                             
It is said that among the ploughing and the breathing                              
The lake was waving and the wind was howling,                              
Beyond the Gowbarrow Park the flowers marching                              
Showing how this colony flirting and seducing.
             
Among the mossy stones they are growing, resting,              
Sleeping, dancing, smiling, tossing, and marching.              
The fiery storms winding and the giant waves roaring        
But never they disturbing nor damaging causing.
                             
The raining is coming, the Luff under the reaching,                              
It is time for resting, putting the whole thing                              
On the note making for the future referencing                              
Then the amazing lines sprouting and emerging!
             
Yes ... the swaying and amazing lines are waiting                
Dancing and tossing through the path of traveling              
Whispering the hope of light full of promising              
Bridging and answering the human eternal longing!
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          When the title 'How was a Poem Composed' is used as a key word for AI Poem Generator, then the result is like this:

In days of old, when tales were told
And stories spun, with magic untold
A poet sat, with quill in hand
And dreams that danced, in his mind so grand

He pondered long, with thoughts so deep
How to craft a poem, with beauty to keep
He sought the muse, with heart so pure
And waited for the words to pour

The wind it whispered, with secrets so sweet
Of tales untold, and dreams unmeet
The poet listened, with heart so wide
And let the words, his soul inside

The words they flowed, like a river so bright
With rhymes so rich, and metaphors so tight
The poet wrote, with passion so true
And the poem, it came to life, anew

It spoke of love, and life so grand
Of dreams that soar, and hearts so bland
It told of hope, and dreams so bright
And the beauty, of the poet's sight

So here it is, this poem so grand
Crafted with love, and dreams so bland
A tale of how, a poem was made
With beauty so bright, and words so played.

          The poem is beautiful, even it is so beautiful, but it is far from recognizing the main allusion. Why? Let's take a look for another result if the key words change to 'how was a poem composed, man of cloud, Eusemere, Gowbarrow Park, and flowers'.

In days of old, when words were gold,
A man of cloud, a poet bold,
Didst sit and ponder, lost in thought,
His mind aflame with creative sought.

Eusemere, a place of grace,
Didst inspire his soul, a wondrous space,
Where flowers bloomed in vibrant hues,
And Gowbarrow Park, a beauty anew.

The man of cloud, with pen in hand,
Didst weave a tale of love and land,
A poem born of passion and fire,
That echoed through the rolling wire.

The flowers, they danced in breeze,
Their petals soft as silken ease,
And Eusemere, a place of dreams,
Didst provide the poet with his themes.

The man of cloud, with heart aglow,
Didst compose a poem, slow and low,
That spoke of love and nature's grace,
And Gowbarrow Park, a wondrous place.

So here, in this poem so grand,
We find the man of cloud, a true bard,
Whose words didst flow like a river wide,
And Eusemere, a place to reside.

       The result, according to Kasidi, is much much better, even it is much closer to the allusion in the first poem. As a final touch the key words given will be expanded and we watch the result. The key words become  'how was a poem composed, man of cloud, Eusemere, Gowbarrow Park, and flowers, romantic period, I wandered lonely as a cloud', and the result?

 

In days of yore, when poetry was king,
A man of cloud, named Eusemere, did sing
Of Gowbarrow Park, with flowers in bloom
During the romantic period, a time of boom

He wandered lonely as a cloud, with heart so light
His words flowed like a river, with all his might
The breeze carried his voice, to the ears of the land
As he composed a poem, with a gentle hand

The flowers in the park, they danced and swayed
As if they were alive, and had their own way
Their colors so vibrant, their scent so sweet
They added magic, to the poet's treat

Eusemere, with pen in hand, did write
Of the beauty of nature, and the beauty of the night
The stars twinkled above, like diamonds in the sky
As he composed his poem, with a sigh

And so the poem was born, a masterpiece so fine
A testament to the power of the rhyme
It lives on still, in the hearts of those who read
A poem of love, of beauty, and of the poet's creed. 

           The result is a good poem but it seems that AI Poem Generator fails to recognize the allusion of the first poem even so many features has already been added to the key-words. Kasidi seems above it when creativy matters must be considered. Bravo ...

Note:

Poem entitled ‘How was a Poem Composed’ has already been narrated, recorded, and uploded in https://youtu.be/OJ_2NvYWa5s?si=cu9UmKhpHUxde8qa and in its description can be read the following

Inspired by an amazing poem written by a very famous poet from Romantic Period this humble verse was composed for the sake of the students from a poetry class. it will be very logical and reasonable that before an assignment is given to the students, an example must be given first, and this poem can be considered as an example not only for composing a poem but also for reciting it.

Later on a poem entitled 'Tourette' was composed to accompany a very famous poem by William Blake entitled 'Tyger' and a poem by Paul Board entitled 'Benzene'. Another video will be recorded to show the plain reciting of it.

All pictures, photos, videos and music are taken from the data base of the apps used for recording this video. Since those materials are free to be used, mentioning the detail sources are unnecessary. Even this poem itself can be used freely.