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Kasidi vs AI (2) - How was a Poem Composed

21 November 2024   11:01 Diperbarui: 21 November 2024   15:59 40
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It spoke of love, and life so grand
Of dreams that soar, and hearts so bland
It told of hope, and dreams so bright
And the beauty, of the poet's sight

So here it is, this poem so grand
Crafted with love, and dreams so bland
A tale of how, a poem was made
With beauty so bright, and words so played.

          The poem is beautiful, even it is so beautiful, but it is far from recognizing the main allusion. Why? Let's take a look for another result if the key words change to 'how was a poem composed, man of cloud, Eusemere, Gowbarrow Park, and flowers'.

In days of old, when words were gold,
A man of cloud, a poet bold,
Didst sit and ponder, lost in thought,
His mind aflame with creative sought.

Eusemere, a place of grace,
Didst inspire his soul, a wondrous space,
Where flowers bloomed in vibrant hues,
And Gowbarrow Park, a beauty anew.

The man of cloud, with pen in hand,
Didst weave a tale of love and land,
A poem born of passion and fire,
That echoed through the rolling wire.

The flowers, they danced in breeze,
Their petals soft as silken ease,
And Eusemere, a place of dreams,
Didst provide the poet with his themes.

The man of cloud, with heart aglow,
Didst compose a poem, slow and low,
That spoke of love and nature's grace,
And Gowbarrow Park, a wondrous place.

So here, in this poem so grand,
We find the man of cloud, a true bard,
Whose words didst flow like a river wide,
And Eusemere, a place to reside.

       The result, according to Kasidi, is much much better, even it is much closer to the allusion in the first poem. As a final touch the key words given will be expanded and we watch the result. The key words become  'how was a poem composed, man of cloud, Eusemere, Gowbarrow Park, and flowers, romantic period, I wandered lonely as a cloud', and the result?

 

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