Kasidi vs AI (16) - Human Longing, Human Understanding

Human Longing, Human Understanding

And then, the stars are falling and the lightning
Roaring like a female lion losing its only darling
Earth trembling, sky shocking, all souls rocking.
Time is coming after waiting for and responding
That God is being angry with all of human being.
Even time walks slowly but a spear is gliitering,
Sending a message that it's ready for executing.
All tree without fruit will be cutting, then burning,
The new ones will be planted, cultivated; caring
Is the key, to ensure that everything is growing.
Growing properly, ready to fruit ready blooming.
That is a plan A, the picture is dull, consuming
All the left human hope, and the rest is nothing,
Except uncertainty reflecting the human longing.
How is about the plan B, which is also waiting?

Since all the time the highest sin is reproducing
Not only the shams but also the darkness thing,
The journey of human being is far away drifting.
If the Command says 'do this not that', thinking
The opposite is quite interesting as the starting
Point, for eternal journey, from the west sailing
To the east, from the north to the south, rolling,
Showing how the original sin covers everything.
The last and the eternal sailings are interesting
Since all reflections are mirrored and picturing
The mozaic of civilizations, the prays glittering
Sending secret messages to the throne daring.
The unswerving belief in salvation is standing,
Firm as a crack defending ocean roar pushing.

And then, the stars are falling and the lightning
Roaring like a female lion losing its only darling
Earth trembling, sky shocking, all souls rocking.
Like a pendulum gets a touch, hope is swaying,
Far right far left, the middle whispers a greeting
And murmuring the secret charm then gathering
The whole universe energy as an eternal praying
For assisting all human beings who are straying,
Don't know finish line, don't know the path facing.
The hidden energy smiling, nodding, encouraging
To soothe the rest of human longing for grabbing
A course of the creator, who never stops creating.

Dr. Tri Budhi Sastrio -- XZSS04042017 -- EIP no. 1
+6287853451949 -- tribudhis@yahoo.com

If the title of this poem is given to AIPG and the respond is

In the depths of the human heart, a longing resides,
A yearning for something more, beyond the mundane tides.
It's the desire for connection, for love that abides,
A craving for understanding, that our souls cannot hide.

We reach for the stars, and the skies above,
To find the answers to our deepest love.
We seek the truth, and the wisdom of age,
To unlock the secrets of life's infinite stage.

But in our search, we often forget,
The beauty of the present, and what we've got.
The world around us, with all its grace,
Is filled with wonder, and a sacred place.

So let us embrace the longing within,
And use it to fuel our quest for understanding.
For in the depths of our hearts, the answers lie,
To the human longing, and the human understanding, we try.

          If we add the words such as ‘stars, female lion, never stop creating’ then the following poem emerges:
         
In the night sky, a canvas so vast and wide,
A twinkling tapestry, where stars reside,
Their celestial dance, a symphony so bright,
A beauty that awakens, the human heart's delight.

Their light, a beacon, in the darkest night,
Guiding us forward, with all their might,
Their brilliance, a reflection of our own,
A reminder of the beauty we hold within.

Oh, the human longing, for the unknown,
A yearning so deep, it's forever shown,
The stars above, a mystery so grand,
A call to explore, this vast land.

Yet, in our search, we must understand,
The beauty that's within, our own land,
The female lion, a symbol of strength and grace,
A reminder of the power within our embrace.

For creation never stops, it's a never-ending stream,
A flow of inspiration, a dream,
The stars, a constant reminder, to never stop,
To keep creating, to never drop.

So let us look to the stars, for guidance and light,
And let the female lion, be our shining beacon bright,
For within our own hearts, the power resides,
To create and dream, and never divide.

          If we also add the words such as ‘God, salvation, civilization’ then the emerged poem is

In the twilight of the cosmos, where stars burn bright,
A longing stirs within our hearts, a yearning for the light.
A quest for understanding, a search for the true,
A reaching forth for the divine, an eternal hue.

A female lion's roar echoes through the night,
Her strength and grace, a shining beacon in sight.
With each step forward, we find our own way,
A journey through the ages, to a brighter day.

God's love shines down upon us, a guiding force,
Salvation's gentle touch, a healing course.
Civilization's embrace, a shelter from the storm,
Together we create, a masterpiece, a living form.

Our longing for the stars, a reflection of the divine,
Our understanding of the heart, a gift from the divine.
With every breath we take, our spirit soars,
Never stopping, never still, forever we adore.

For in the beauty of the stars, we find our way,
A never-ending journey, night and day.
To the depths of the human heart, we reach and soar,
A rhythm of the cosmos, forever and more.

          What do we have to say? AIPG is good. It can give a very fast respond and the result is not bad at all, but as it is stated before, so far, Kasidi is probably better than AIPG in term of ‘mengada-ada’ or in English ‘making it up’. What do you think?