[Re-telling] The Alchemist's Letter (2015)

 

The rumors of the miraculous device remained only rumors. At the end of a father’s story to his daughter, he gave the daughter a golden watch and told to her what he wrote in the alchemist’s letter.

 

#You can check this short movie on >> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Wk8meL7Glk

 

 

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