Kasidi vs AI (4) - The Scents of Betrayal in this City

The scent of betrayal, a heavy load
A burden we carry, a weight so slow
The fragrance of a lie so smooth
A poison that infects the heart's womb

In the air, a scent so foul
Betrayal's stench, a bitter souvenir
A reminder of a love so lost
A memory that we cannot boast.

        The rhyming poem is not bad at all but as it is stated by Kasidi, this poem is lack of understanding that the original poem is meant to target the G-officials who betray not only the country but also the people because honesty is betrayed by them. Then what happens if the location, it is Surabaya, is inserted?

In Surabaya's streets, a scent of deceit
Lingers in the air, a treacherous feat
Betrayal's stench, a poisonous breath
Inflicts pain, like a venomous death

The city's heart, once full of grace
Now tainted with a traitor's embrace
The scent of betrayal, a heavy load
Weighs down the soul, like a leaden shroud

The flowers once bloomed with vibrant hues
Now wilted, like a lover's blues
The scent of betrayal, a bitter taste
Leaves a heart, like a withered waste

The wind whispers secrets, of a dark past
A tale of betrayal, that will forever last
The scent of Surabaya, a haunting refrain
Echoes the pain, of a love in vain.

        The result is still a good rhyming poem but a new variable seems distracting the attention of the generator and Surabaya becomes the main focus of it. So in short, AI Poem Generator cannot generate a creative poem as creative as a human being. The motto 'creativy matters' gets the strong foundation again, doesn't it? (tbs-kas/sda/05122024-087853451949)