The good and bad side of using facebook
I.Thesis statement : Facebook is a social network, and it is used by some people around the world. Indonesia is the 3th country after USA and England for the most face book user. It has some good and bad side that many people should consider.
II.Topic sentence : there are good sides of using facebook.
A.Main supporting detail : communication media and entertainment.
1.Supporting detail : chatting
2.Supporting detail : having communication with old friend with some facility served.
3.Supporting detail : sharing pictures, experiences.
B.Main supporting detail : facebook for business.
1.Supporting detail : facebook as promotion media.
2.Supporting detail : connect with buyers and other business man.
C.Main supporting detail : facebook is used for invitation of an event and meeting
1. Supporting detail : by create a forum, some people can share an event and invite other people to join.
2. Supporting detail : some people use facebook for meeting and use it for discussion about their planing the next destination or about an event.
Concluding sentence: they are some good sides of facebook for people. It can help their job and it main function is to communicate with other people around the world.
III.Topic sentence : there are some bad sides of using facebook.
A.Main supporting sentence : some people use facebook for deception.
Supporting detail : shally case.
B.Main supporting sentence : kidnapping.
Supporting sentence : some case of students who kidnapped by new friend by flirt via facebook.
Concluding sentence : Many bad sides are appearing when using facebook especially for the unwise people. Many crime facts are happen and many people should consider of it.
Concluding sentence : the use of facebook is depends on the users. It can be useful if it used for the positive purpose such as business, studies, and entertainment and it can be useless if it used without any responsibilities.
fatah ahmadi
